Tuesday, October 07, 2008

Tanner's Pen, the writings of an 8 yr old boy

The English Settlement
by Tanner

In 1607, a troop of English men successfully sailed to the New World. They landed in Virginia and named it Jamestown, after their king. In Virginia, the land was a swampy wilderness. The settlers, who struggled for survival, grew weak because they did not want to work. Sadly, over half of the starving settlers died.

The settlers, who were inadequate, would not have survived without the cunning Captain John Smith. John Smith kept peace with the agreeable Indians and traded goods for food. Cleverly, John Smith devised a rule...No work, no food. He saved the settlement.

The settlers did not collect gold, but gathered useful tobacco. They grew the tobacco and sold it to England. Jamestown Virginia, the first English settlement, is still a city today.

3 comments:

Vickie said...

Dear Tanner, I so enjoyed your essay in the English Settlers. Your use of descriptive words amaze me. You are quite the writer for a young man your age. You have a strong future in writing. Keep up the good work and I will look forward to reading more of your writings in the future.
Love, Maw Maw Vickie

respectful said...

Tanner,
Your paragraphs relay so succinctly what Jamestown was about. Keep up the spectatular work!

Mrs. Corneroli

respectful said...

Tanner,
Your paragraphs relay so succinctly what Jamestown was like. Keep up the spectacular writing!